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Evaluation

Here is my evaluation, this is made up from my own opinions and also the help from both Freddie and Finn.

on the whole i am happy with my script but there are a few things that have been picked that need to be changed, once these few things are changed the script will be improved to a higher level.

Things that I would change .  there could be more action for the alien just to make it easier to understand (this will be adapted) other than that I am happy with the script and after checking it over I am satisfied it is up to standard.